Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Week 1 Storytelling: The Young Lone Wolf

The Young Lone Wolf


One night, the young lone wolf was stalking the old hare late into the night. The old hare caught the wolf’s scent, and he decided to speak with the wolf, for he knew he was too old and frail to flee from him.
            “Why waste your time hunting old hares, like me, when there is a herd of deer just past the bear’s den?” asked the old hare.
            “I dare not attack that herd, for the bear is feeding on the young fawn. I am a young lone wolf, and am too small to fight the large bear.”
            “I know of an ancient, secret magic,” lied the old hare, “that will allow you to become larger even than the bear. If you spare me this night, I can teach you this magic so that you will not only be fed this night, but for many nights to come.”
            The young lone wolf considered what the old hare had proposed. He knew the only disadvantage he had against the bear was his size, but if what the old hare had said was true, he would gladly trade his meal this hour for many meals in the nights to come. The young lone wolf agreed and the old hare instructed the young lone wolf what he must do for the magic to work. The old hare kept the young lone wolf busy with foolish errands until dawn.







“It has worked even better than I thought!” lied the hare as he pretend to look amazed at the young lone wolf’s size.
            The young lone wolf did not feel like he had grown, but as the sun rose, it cast a long shadow behind the young lone wolf. He gawked in amazement, and immediately ran off to the herd of deer before the magical effects wore off.
            The young lone wolf was stopped at the bear’s den by the large bear. The bear was still much larger than the young lone wolf, and he cast a far longer shadow. With one strong strike of his paw, the bear sent the young lone wolf back from where he came.
            When the young lone wolf returned home, the old hare was gone; the young lone wolf then spent another day with an empty stomach.


Author's Note: This story is based on the fable The Wolf and His Shadow, which can be found in Aesop for Children, illustrated by Milo Winter . The original fable tells the story of a wolf who sees his own shadow as the sun sets, causing him to think himself much larger and much greater than he really is. He then decides he should be king instead of the lion. When he goes to challenge the lion, he immediately finds himself under the much larger shadow cast by the lion and is killed.
           When I first read the fable, I thought, 'Wolves aren't in Africa with lions, are they?' so I changed the lion character into a bear. Wolves and bears sometimes compete for food, so this made sense to me. Of course, now that I think about it, the lion could have been a mountain lion, which would have made sense, but oh well. I also added the hare, because I like a story with some deception in it. The deception wasn't life threatening, too, so the wolf gained the opportunity to learn from his mistake. The lessons I would like the wolf to learn are: pride comes before the fall, and NEVER trust a bunny.


Works Cited
"The Wolf and His Shadow" by Aesop, from Aesop for Children (2006). Web Source: www.gutenberg.org






5 comments:

  1. Josh -
    I had never heard of "The Wolf and His Shadow" before. The wolf is one of my favorite animals, so I'm very happy to read that you allowed the wolf to survive in your story, having learned a very valuable lesson. I can also see by reading your Author's Note that you put a great deal of thought into your story, as the lion and the wolf do not live side by side. I thought this was a very innovative way to retell the story. I really enjoyed it!

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  2. Josh,
    First question – do you prefer to go by Josh or Joshua? I just want to make sure I am addressing you as you prefer! I also did my first storytelling post on a wolf story from the Aesops Fable book. I had a hard time getting started with these storytelling posts, but I think you did a great job of capturing the “retelling” concept. Great work.
    Mackenzie

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    1. Either is fine. I have a slight preference for Joshua, but most people call me Josh.

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  3. From the very beginning, I loved the hare's attitude. He was so clever and knew his limits. His dialogue was my favorite part. I was not familiar with the original until now, but I really love your take on it. Using the hare has a way to lead up to the shadow being large brought a new perspective on it and introduced us to new, unique characters of your own. Likewise I enjoy your take on the wolf, because in the original he is so proud of himself already with his shadow, and in your retelling, he knows he is outmatched before the hare tricks him. Good job!

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  4. I honestly felt a little bad for the wolf, since I knew he was being tricked. I think it is interesting how wolves are supposed to be so clever and witty, but they are usually the ones being tricked and taken advantage of in stories like this. I think you did a very good job of actually writing the story. At first, since I have not read this story, I was confused as to whether or not you had written in the original and then you were going to write your story. Great job! Keep up the good work!

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