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One day, the cat ran into a childhood friend of his, Mr.
Fox. The fox had been away for several years, during which he devoted his time
to his education. The cat approached the fox, who was carrying a large sack on
his back, and greeted his old friend. However, the fox looked upon the cat with
contempt. The fox considered himself to be greater than the cat, for he had
spent his time learning hundreds of tricks for escaping predators. He the cat
that he would consider the cat lucky if he knew but one of these tricks.
Indeed, the cat did know one trick. If ever he found himself
fleeing from a predator, he would simply run up a tree and hide in the
branches. He told this to the fox. The fox laughed and showed the cat the sack
he had been carrying on his back. He explained that inside that sack were
nearly a thousand tricks he could use, all of which would outperform the cat’s
simple trick.
The cat became angry. He did not consider himself overly
prideful, but he did not like the way his old friend had spoken to him. He
decided to challenge the fox. The next day, they would open up the farmer’s
fence that kept his many dogs from escaping. The dogs would immediately chase
after the cat and the fox, and whoever demonstrated their trick the greatest
would be the victor. The fox agreed and said that he would bring his sack and
chose one at random to show that any of his tricks would be greater than the
cat’s. The fox then went on his way.
The next morning, the fox and the cat met at the farmer’s
fence. Already, the dogs were barking wildly at the two. They stood ten yards
away while the rabbit, a mutual friend, waited for the cat’s signal to unlock
the fence. The fox tried to open his sack to choose a trick, but could not
untie the knot. What he did not know, was that, during the previous night, the
cat snuck over and tied a knot around the bag so that it could not be opened. As
the fox struggled with the sack, the cat told him to simply think of a trick
from memory. However, the fox had not committed any of his tricks to memory; he
only wrote them down and put them in his sack.
The cat then gave the rabbit the signal to unlock the fence.
Immediately, the dogs began their chase. The cat found a nearby tree, ran up
its trunk, and hid amongst its branches. As he looked down, he saw the fox still
fumbling with his sack. He called out to the fox to hurry up and choose a
trick, but it was too late. The fox could not think of a trick and was eaten by
the dogs.
Author’s Note:
This story is based on The Fox and the Cat from the Brothers Grimm unit. The original story is
basically the same as mine. However, I did add the part about the cat tying a
knot around the sack. I like this story because it gives value to experience
over education. Education is very important, but it is useless if not applied.
The fox “knew” hundreds of tricks, but never did use any enough to commit to
memory. The cat knew only one trick, but he practiced it often.
Bibliography
“The Fox and the Cat” from The Grimm Brothers’ Children’s
and Household Tales translated by D. L. Ashliman (1998-2013).
Hi Joshua, there seems to be a lot of stories in this class that involve animals and trickery! Your story was very well written and easy to follow. It is good that you noted in your author’s note that you kept the story the same but added some small details. I have done the same with a lot of my stories. I usually enjoy the stories the way they are and do not want to make major changes!
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a nice story with a good moral and all, but come on, cats are evil and should never win over a fox. Foxes are so cool and weird and make horribly odd noises. My friend and I legitimately looked into how much it would cost to buy a domesticated fox. Actually, it was about the same amount as a golden retriever. Anyway, good story, bad winner.
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