There once was an old king who had a daughter who refused to
be married. She was the most beautiful woman in all the land; however, she was
full of pride and conceit. In her eyes, there was no man good enough for her,
and every eligible bachelor who came to ask her for her hand in marriage was
sent away with the sound of laughter and mocking.
The king even put on a grand ball, in hopes that one suitor
would sweep his daughter off her feet. However, the princess would not dance
with a single one of them; she found something wrong with each man who asked
her to dance: one was too fat, another was too skinny; one was too short,
another was too tall; etc. There was one handsome, noble king whom she made a
big mockery of. She claimed his chin was pointed like the beak of a thrush
bird. The name, King Thrushbeard, stuck with him from that day on.
Thrush Bird. Web Source: Wikipedia |
The old king was furious with his daughter. He apologized to
his guests and politely dismissed them. Then, in his anger, he swore that he
would marry his daughter off to the first beggar that came to the castle door.
It was not long before a man dressed in rags came to the
castle asking to play a song for the king and his daughter. The king agreed,
and the beggar played beautifully on his small harp and sang a lovely song.
Then he asked for a small sum for reward. The king did not offer the beggar
money, but instead offered his daughter’s hand in marriage. The princess was in
complete shock. However, her father could not break his word. A wedding was
held immediately and the princess became a beggar’s wife.
The beggar then led his wife out of her old home. She asked
him where his carriage was, but was saddened to find out that they would be
travelling on foot.
The two passed through a large forest. The beggar’s wife
asked him who owned the forest. He explained that it belonged to King Thrushbeard, and it could have been hers
if she had taken him for a husband. She could tell by the tone of his voice
that he knew of her mockery of her suitors.
The two passed through a beautiful, green meadow. The beggar’s
wife asked him who owned the meadow. He explained that it too belonged to King
Thrushbeard, and it could have been hers if she had taken him for a husband.
The two then passed through a large city with many fine
building. The beggar’s wife asked him who owned the city. He explained that it
was King Thrushbeard’s kingdom, and it could have been hers if she had taken
him for a husband.
Finally, the two came to a very small cottage. The beggar’s
wife asked him who owned the wretched hole, fearing the answer he would give
her. He explained that it was his home, and it is now hers that she has taken
him for a husband.
Author’s note:
This story is based on part one of King Thrushbeard from the Grimm Brothers Unit. The story continues
and has a surprising ending. I do not wish to spoil it here, because I plan to
include both parts in my storybook, Pride
Cometh Before Destruction. I really enjoyed the original, so I only wished
to condense the story and not edit any further.
Bibliography:
King Thrushbeard
from Household Stories by the Brothers Grim, translated by Lucy Crane (1886)
Hey Joshua! I thought that you did an excellent job with your storytelling post this week! You have such a great style of writing that has a nice flow to it and is easy to follow along with. I really appreciated the descriptive word choices you used. They helped to bring your story to life. Wonderful job and I hope you have a great weekend!
ReplyDeleteHello Joshua! Wow I think that you have done such a great job with this storytelling post! I think that it is very clear that you really did understand the main elements present in the original and did a great job with transforming them to fit your own style! I think that you did a great job with adding in a few new details to make it your own but still keeping the original themes! Great job!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of a story I read where a beautiful princess wouldn't marry anyone because she didn't find them good enough. But, she did it because she was looking for someone who was beautiful on the inside. Hahahaha. I like that she became a beggars wife against her will. Normally, I would not find this humorous, but I thought that the way you described it in your story was great, and made me laugh.
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